WALT: paint an image in the readers minds
Ocean is so smooth sparkly and it haves a aqua color to it the ocean haves smooth waves and it is really freezing like the ice.
The Sand is soft and wonderful that you will fall asleep on the really really soft sand and with a really hot sun in your eyes
The sky it really shiny just like the sun with a cool summer breeze go past will you sit down and watch the ocean go past.
When you relaxes on the waves you feel like doing something fun like surfboard.When you surfboard you see all of the fishes and the beautiful soft sand.