Good afternoon! How are you doing today? My name is Olive and I'm a blogger for The Summer Learning Journey. I can't wait to see what you and all your classmates get up to!
What a great start you've made! I love your introduction! It made me laugh so much! Isn't she a great singer! Just a reminder to link your images with where you got them. It's super important to let your readers know where you got the artwork. I think you have a great background! Great job on making it a groovy gradient! Ka pai on a good post!
Just remember to make sure you are writing in your own words, not using ones from the internet. We’re looking forward to seeing more of your posts from the 16th December (Next week). There’s lots of points at stake and some great prizes to win!
Hi Central my name is Zane and I am a year 6 student at Paihia School and I really liked your blog about the summer learning journey task because it reminded me of when I did the summer learning journey teaser week as well. I really liked the way you put facts about lorde because I got to learn more stuff about her. To Improve you could maybe put more stuff about her like her hobbies or her most popular song. What is her most popular song?
Kia ora Central,
ReplyDeleteGood afternoon! How are you doing today? My name is Olive and I'm a blogger for The Summer Learning Journey. I can't wait to see what you and all your classmates get up to!
What a great start you've made! I love your introduction! It made me laugh so much! Isn't she a great singer! Just a reminder to link your images with where you got them. It's super important to let your readers know where you got the artwork. I think you have a great background! Great job on making it a groovy gradient! Ka pai on a good post!
Just remember to make sure you are writing in your own words, not using ones from the internet. We’re looking forward to seeing more of your posts from the 16th December (Next week). There’s lots of points at stake and some great prizes to win!
Ngā mihi,
Olive
Hi Central my name is Zane and I am a year 6 student at Paihia School and I really liked your blog about the summer learning journey task because it reminded me of when I did the summer learning journey teaser week as well. I really liked the way you put facts about lorde because I got to learn more stuff about her. To Improve you could maybe put more stuff about her like her hobbies or her most popular song. What is her most popular song?
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